The ground erupted into fury and everything was gone nothing was here anymore, just wreckage and destruction.
Everything was gone and destroyed, but there was still a tiny part of the village left but it was slowly disappearing into nothingness,
We knew it would happen until nothing was left and destruction covered the land.
Decimation was everywhere and nothing but it...
Kia ora Liam. Thanks for posting your awesome writing. I love some of the emotive language you use like erupted, destruction and decimation. One thing to try is when you reread your work, if you find any of the same words close together - change one. Having the same word too close together can stop the flow. Look at the word 'gone' and 'nothing/nothingness'.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading your next piece of writing.