Thursday 5 November 2020

Onomatopoeia poem

 Hey bloggers, Today I made a Onomatopoeia Poem, I really enjoyed making this and I hope you all enjoy this.


here it is.


My hot face drips with sweat like a waterfall.


The sand flutters around with the flow of the wind.


The waves splash and break down, moving to the ocean.


I can feel the air roar against my skin.


Beach

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 November 2020 at 12:13

    Hello Liam, my name is Deborah, Im in room 24.
    I think that your poem is great, when I read it the description makes me feel as if Im there. Next time you shold maybe try to put in a picture so it makes it easier to think your there. What would be your best sentence?

    Thank you for sharing your post. You should check out my blog...
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    Deborah

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