today I made a paragraph describing a image.
the paragraph had to have these 3 things.
aaawwubbis sentence.
adverb sentence starter.
and it has to have this sentence.
this was no ordinary library.
here it is.
I zipped through the yellow old pages looking for clues of what to do to get out.
suddenly,I had it,I saw on one of the pages a key I kept it in my pocket.
instantaneously I kicked my leg,all the way to the door.
but then I saw another lock,
I needed another key!!
I looked everywhere.
But then I realised something truly incredible...
your were supposed to stay at the library if you want to escape the library.
this was no ordinary library.
I hope you enjoyed.
Hi Liam. Well done on using -ly to begin your writing. I like how you made a connection to the novel we are reading. Could you describe the things behind the girl (or you) a bit more? What do you see? What do you hear?
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