slowly but quickly the moon surface becomes grey and holey,with holes in every corner.
the lack of air makes me sick.
one time when I did something brave was when I was starting a new school and I was nervous about whether I would get any friends.
Kia ora Liam, how is your day going today?
ReplyDeleteKa pai for doing all of the day two activities! The information you have provided about the aviators is really interesting and the colours you’ve used on the poster are bright and eye-catching, well done!
You have done the activities correctly although from what I can see, you have put lots of detail and effort into the first two activities which is fantastic, but then you seem to run out of energy for the last activity. To help with this, I would suggest you make a post for each activity instead of three activities in one post. This will make your blog more informative and detailed, and will bring more people to your blog, as well as give you a higher chance of gaining extra points! How does this sound?
I have awarded you full points for the first two activities on this post, and half points for the third activity as it needs more information and detail in order to get full points. You can either edit this post or delete it and create an entirely new one with the updated activity.
Well done for blogging, I look forward to seeing your edited posts!
Eliza :)
Hi Eliza,thanks for commenting on my blog.
ReplyDeleteI think it is a better idea to to 1 activity every post.
blog ya later.
Liam.