1.If I had three superpowers I would choose,
flight so I could fly into space,
my second one would be teleportation so I could teleport anywhere,
and also if I was late for something I could just teleport there.
and my third superpower would be regeneration so I could never get hurt.
2. the first question I would ask would be if they enjoyed playing basketball.
my second question would be if they like watching basketball,
and my third question would be if they had friends that also play basketball.
3. my dream job is to be business worker.
People that could help me to achieve are, my parents and my teachers,
I know that being a business worker can be very stressful especially if your a CEO or something like that.
I know that being a business worker can be very stressful especially if your a CEO or something like that.
Hi again Liam,
ReplyDeleteWell done for doing all of the day three activities! I enjoyed reading the superpowers you’ve written about, and I like how you’ve explained why you would choose these particular superpowers. I would also choose teleportation because being able to travel the world and not have to pay for flights would be amazing!
Similarly to your day two post; you have done the activities correctly, although from what I can see, you have put lots of detail and effort into the first two activities which is brilliant, but then you seem to run out of energy for the last activity. To help with this, I would suggest you make a post for each activity instead of three activities in one post. This will make your blog more informative and detailed, and will bring more people to your blog, as well as give you a higher chance of gaining extra points!
I have awarded you full points for the first two activities on this post, and half points for the third activity as it needs more information and detail in order to get full points. You can either edit this post or delete it and create an entirely new one with the updated activity.
Ka pai for blogging and I look forward to seeing your edited posts!
Eliza :)
Hi Eliza thanks for commenting on my blog.
Deletethanks for the feedback,next time I will try to make all my post into 3 separate blog posts.
blog ya later.
Liam.
Morning Liam,
ReplyDeleteThat would be awesome, thanks!
Eliza :)